Narrative writing

Narrative Writing





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Your task: This term’s inquiry is all about working well as a team. Create a narrative/story. In your story, a group of children are going to get stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti. Tell the story of how the group got there and how they get off the island.











Planning:





Characters:Zac Jack


Setting/ where:stranded island


Problem: Stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti.


Resolution:





Write your story here:





Once upon a time there lived 2 tenaggers flying around a island on there jetpacks when zac and jack were flying jacks jet pack was running out of fuel and when it ran out of fuel zac rushed down to help him but when zac rushed down he nearly crashed because he was going to fast.Next zacs jetpack ran out of fuel to so now both of there jetpacks have ran out of gas s they are now stranded on a deserted island.THe stuff that they have is a rope and 2 cans of food and a chilly bin and you have to try and get off the deserted island with only that stuff plus the other stuff on the island.There were also a gas station on the other side of the island the island is actually only small but there is a lot and I mean a lot of Dangerous creatures around the small island.Zac and Jack heard about and they started walking through the island with there jetpacks and the supplies from the beach when they approached a creature they would literally try and punch it to sleep and if that didn’t work they would try and hit it with the jetpack.After Zac and Jack destroyed the creature Zac and Jack kept on walking through the island and suddenly they saw the gas station but zac and jack also heard a big stomp and then they both looked around in the bushes and in the tree but then they heard the stomp again and then they noticed that it was up in the air can you guess what it was?Did you guess if you didn’t know it was a humongous giant but one thing he didn’t have was 2 eyes because one of his eyes were blind so he couldn't see properly but the bad thing was he was standing in front of the gas station so zac and jack couldn't get in at less they try to wake up the Humongous giant but then zac looked at his jetpack and it had just enough to get back to the other side so he used it and he flew back to the side that they were walking from then zac quickly grabbed the chilly bin and the 2 cans of food then he also grabbed the rope then zac started to fly back but he was a little bit worried because his gas was nearly done but luckily he just made it back before he ran out of gas then zac and jack used the chilly bin for a plate and then they tipped the food inside next they put the rope around the chilly bin and threw the chilly bin to the Humongous giant on then the giant finally woke up and started to eat so now the giant is out of the way now zac and jack can fill up there jetpack to get off the island wait i just noticed that they only have like 2 minutes because that is how long the giant takes to eat the chilly bin of food.Then when he finished he went to go look for more food next zac and jack came out and started flying away suddenly the giant came back and chased after zac and jack for more food but then the giant thought that jack and zac were food and starting to run fast as for food and then zac an jack saw that the giant was chasing them so they put the jetpacks on blast to get away faster then they got away but then the giant was destroying the island because he didn’t get anymore food.