Dangerous writing challenge.

This is my very hard writing here is the link to the writing page

Once upon a time there lived a little baby elephant drinking water from a small river and as the elephant was drinking from the river he saw a little baby cat stuck  on a small rock            trying to get back on to the land without getting wet as the elephant tryed to rescue the cat from the small rock he  reached out with his tounge and when the cat saw the elephant reach out and put his toynge there for the cat to jump on the elephants trunk so the cat could jump on the elephants trunk to jump to safety   so the cat would not get wet   so the elephant chose to jump in the water and grab the cat.

I was one of the people that were not defeated
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